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1. ڽ Ұּ.

 * ̸: ֿ
 * : 6.5+,
 * Ⱓ: 2 (ĸŸ 1 ϴ)
 * IELTSΰ: ״

 
2. ֱٿ IELTS迡 ۼּ.
 * : 10 21 ( 11ʿ Դµ 11 ־ ı⸦ Ǿ..)
 * : Academic
 * : Listening( 7.0 ), Speaking( 6.5 ), Reading( 7.0 ), Writing( 6.0 )

 
3. ġ Ұ ּ.
  ̿ θ غ ʹ Ҿ ̾ ƿ. г¥ ٰ, Ⱓ ؾϴ ׷ йڰ ʹ Ⱦϴ. ׷ ġ ׻ . , ġ ó 'ƽ' ̾ϴ. Ư, ϰ غߴ ͵ 迡 Ȱ ͵ ׷. Ƹ ̿ غ ϴ°͵ ־, θ غ ׷ ʾ ;. 



4. IELTS  ߴ, ι(Ͽ) Ӱ ּ.
  θ غ  Ͽ(?) , ׷ ܱⰣ 迡 հϱ µ(?) ˷Կ. 
 
 * Reading: 帮, Reading 4߿ ܱⰣ ø ̶ ؿ. ֳϸ ðȿ Ϻϰ ϰ ãƾ ƴ϶, κ paraphrase Ǿ Ǿ & Ǿ ϰų, ã ±Ⱑ ( Դϴ). ׸ 츮 ܾ ־. ׷ θ 𸣴 ܾ ߰ϸ üũϰ ܿ ȴٴ ν ֽϴ. ߸ ƴ Ƹ û ð ؾ ǰ, ߿ ٸ θ ϰ Ǵ ϵ ߻ ־. м Ҷ, 켱 Դ ܾ, ܾ Ȥ üũ Ŀ ű⿡ Ǿ  ܿ. , important necessary, vital and major ̷ ̰, ư basicϰ ִ. ̷ ⺻ ܾ鸸 ˸ Ǯٰ ǹ ? Ǯ , basic important Ǿ Ǫ° ʾƿ ٿ (Ƹ ð й ). 帮°, ܾ ׿ , ÿ ִ ܾ̿. ÿ Ǿ ݺ ִ . Ǯ ( 帱Կ), 20 ƴ϶ 15п 16 ó Ǯ. ׸ ι° Ǯ Ǯ ؼ ϰ ãƺð, ° ڽְ Ǯ ͵ ٰŸ ãƺþ (Ǯ Ǯְ?). ׸ Ȯ߾. ⼭ , ó Ǯ ø ȵȴٴ°ſ. ԵǸ ν Ǿ־, ġ Ȯϰ Ǭ Ȯ ŵ. ð ΰ ϶ ִٴ ־. 趧 ϰ Ǿ Ѵ ݺ ϰ Ǿְŵ? ð Ȯ ¿ 𸣴 Ͱ ð 쫒鼭 ū ִٰ մϴ. ׸ ü Ŀ üũ ٰ κ ¾Ҵ װ 鼭 °ſ (׳ 丸 Ȯϰ üũϴ ƴ϶, κ ߿ϴٰ 帮 ͳ׿). ȹ ÷̾ ó û µ, ϰ ణ Ǫ (?) ſ. Ư, Ǯ ٰŰ Ȯϰ ¾ ¥.. е鵵 ݵ! 
 
 * Listening: Listening 4߿ ܱⰣ ø ִ ̿. ֳϸ , ׸ ø ǿ. е ̼ǿ Űɷ ˾ƿ. 40 ̼DZ ϸ 4-5ð ɸ ? 쿡.. Ϸ ⸸ ϰ, ᱹ ð Ǵ. ׷ Ǫ¹ ϰ ( 帱Կ) ó ׳ . 鵵 ְ, 鵵 ְ? , ٷ ƴ϶ ٽ ϴ. Ư ų, κ ô°ſ. 10 , 15 ƿ. ׸ Ƹ ͵ ſ. ž ǿ. ð 信 ٰŰ Ǵ κа Ǵ κ ̼ غ. Ƹ κ stress üũ ϼ̰ų, ϼſ. κп ΰ ٽ ô°ſ. ׸ 縵 Ʋ κе Ȥ µ ( fossil fuel ȳ Ʋ쵵 ֽϴ), κ ͵帱 . ׳ Ȯϰ ܾ Ƽž Ǵ κ̿. / Ͻô е鵵 ǰŶ µ. Ǯ ĭ  ǰ縦 Ȯ غ. , ̰ ڸ ܼڸ ް ݵ ٵ, Ȯغø 信 ٰŰ ִ Ǵ Ͻǰſ. ڴ ܾ ϴ(?). Ƹ ϰ ϽŴٸ, ߴ κе鵵 鸮ǰſ! 
 
 * Writing: Writing ݵ ƴٰ ϳ. ֳϸ 20оȿ task1 ȿ мϰ ۼؾ ϰ, 40оȿ ġ ȵ鿡 ؼ , Ȥ ذå ؾ ǰŵ. ȵ鿡 ̵ ʾҴٰų, ƿ ó Ǹ Ȳ Ȳ 1ð . 켱 task1 Ѻм( ϴ) ϱ⺸ٴ м ֽô° ƿ. , ǥ, 񱳱 ׸ м ǥ̿. ⺻ 迭 ϵ, Ư ǥ ּ. Ƹ ǥ ͽϴ° ʴ. ׷ , ׸ м ǥ ܿ  1徿 ܿ. ܿ ϸ Ǵϱ. Ƹ ̷ м ǰſ. Task2 , ' ܿ켼' 帱Կ. ֳϸ ޶ ϴ. ׸ ߿Ѱ й̿. , body ߿մϴ. ̾߱,  ̾߱⸦ ִ ̰ŵ? Ȯϰ ȴٸ body ÿϰ ִٰ ؿ. ̵ Ե ֽ ڷ 鼭 ͼž ǿ. ̵ ̰ ̾. 鼭 غ, ư ִ Ȯ嵵 ϼž ǰŵ. ׸ Ϸ翡 1 žߵǿ. ׸ ÷ ž ǿ. ֳϸ, ÷ ؼ ߰ϰ ǰŵ? ׸ ű⼭ ƴ϶ ľ κ ٽ ٽ Ẹ°ſ. ð Ǽ ̴ Ϳ Ŀ μž ȴٰ 帮 ;.  
 
 * Speaking: Speaking ϴ°ſ ̸ ž ǿ. ׸ ð ֽ Ʈ ǥ ƿ. װ  ܿ? ϴ е鵵 ð, ǥ߿ ڱ Կ ޶ٴ ǥ ſ. Բ 10 ̴ּٸ  1-2 ſ. Ϸ翡 1-2, 5̸ 10 Ѿŵ? Ѵ̸ 30 ǿ. ǥ̸ part1,2  and 3 ־. , ִ Ű ߾. ε ܿ û , Ѽ ܿ ְ ŷ ϰִٴ ŵ. ׸ Ϸ翡 15 ϴ ǥ( Ǵ ޶ٴ) ݵ ̶ ؾؿ. ֳϸ Ǹ ؾ״ϱ. ؾ Ẹô°ſ ¥ Ѵٴ ο(2, 3.. ƴڳ?). ̰ ϰ ݺ Ǹ ε ܿ ǥȿ ڿ ɰſ.


5. edm̿ Ե鲲 ϰ ̾߱⸦ ּ.

 Dante : ܰ! ħ հ ־. ׸ ̾߱ ʹ ּż ؿ. £ ʹ ƿ. ¥ ϶´θ ߴ ƿ. ܿ ܿ, . ó 20 Ĺ ּ , Ҵµ Ƽ ߾ ^^ ̿ ְڿ ڴ ġ ƿڽϴ! 帱Կ. ħ ʹ 帳ϴ.

 Heather : ĸŸݿ ó , ̸ ּż ʹ ߾. л ұ ̸ ˰ ߰ŵ.. Ƹ 2 ÷ð, 30 ǥ ..^^ ħ , ŷ ٲٷ ¸ ߾ ƿ. ׷ ĥ ٴ , ҽϴ! ͺ ؼ ڷ鵵 ֽð, ɰּż ʹ ߾. п ͺ䵵   ־! ħ ʰ, ġ ƿڽϴ. 帱Կ. ħ ʹ 帳ϴ.

 Jackie : ŷ ڷ ħ п ŷ ־. Ư ð ϴ ̵ κп. Before & After ð ΰ ־ ʹ ð̾. ׸ ü feedback ٷιٷ ּż ʹ ߾. ŷ ó ÷ ޴ ٰ̾ ұ? ʹ Ҿ! ħ ʰ, ġ ƿڽϴ. ħ ʹ 帳ϴ.

 Caleb : δ޵ ħ п ٹ, ð ִ ־. ׸ پ ϸ鼭, ݰ ִ Ⱑ Ǿ. ῡ ˰ λ , ׷ ѹ մϴ 帮 ;. ħ ʰ, ġ ƿڽϴ. ħ ʹ 帳ϴ.

 Allen : Task1 ׻ ƿ. ֳϸ ϳ ˷ִ , м ̾߱ ִ ϱ. δ޵ ħ п м ο ˰ Ǿ, ̳ ǥ ǥ鵵 ־. ǥ ׷ ħ ƿ. ħ ʰ, ġ ƿڽϴ. ħ ʹ 帳ϴ.
 

6. edm̿ п ּ.

ġ , ְ ִ , ȯ ִ


7. IELTS յ ģ鿡 Ǵ ּ.

  ݵ ϷϷ簡 Ҿϰ, ð ϴ йڼӿ ̿ غϴ 󸶳 ˾ƿ. ̿ θ ϴ°Ŷ ׷ŵ. Ҿ ̱ ϰ غϴ ۿ . غ ص ׻ ƽ ŵ. ʾƿ. ݸ ż е鵵 ó üϼ ڽϴ. ȭ Դϴ.

Heather 17-11-26 15:06
 
׻ ϴ հ ״ и ҰŶ Ͼ! ... ѳ ̾ ̴.... ... ư Ѵ!!! :)
edm̿ 17-11-26 21:43
 
̵ ְ Ƴ& ȳ հ Ѵ ~
 ̰ ƴԿ , Ĺ Ҹ ѹ  ۱   
׻ ǰϰ ٶ ̷ ϱ ϸ. ~!! ̴
                                                                                                                              - Ҹ ׻
edm̿ 17-11-27 10:07
 
ϵ帳ϴ ^^  հ ϵ帳ϴ.  ~ -edm ̿ п-
Jackie 17-11-28 18:00
 
¶дܿ ɾƼ ʷʷ ! Ͻô ް ǽ ϵ! ϵ帮 ״忡 ſ бȰϽñ ڽϴ. ̾!
Caleb 17-12-08 09:28
 
׻ ϰ ׻ ۻ л ε ׿. ε ڼ лȰ ⸦ մϴ. ȭ! :)
 

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