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1. ڽ Ұּ.

 

* ̸:

* : չ, writing ̵ , Ǯ̹

* Ⱓ: 3

* IELTSΰ: ij

 

2. ֱٿ IELTS迡 ۼּ.

* : 8.26

* : Academic ( ), General ( ) <---üũּ.

* : Listening( 7.0 ), Speaking( 6.0 ), Reading( 6.5 ), Writing( 6.0 )

 

3. ġ Ұ ּ.

ϰ ôµ ׷ ׵ ߴ ϸ鼭 ּ Ǭ ƿ.

 

4. IELTS  ߴ, ι(Ͽ) Ӱ ּ.

* Reading: ʹݿ ؽǷ ߱ Ǫ ͺ ؿ ϴ. ð ԰ Բ Ǯٸ ڽð ٽ IJ ؼϰ ٰſ ƽϴ. ׷ٺ  ܾ  paraphrasing Ǿ Ȯ ־ װ͵ Ʈ غ ַ  Ǿ ٰŰ Ǵ ľ ־ϴ. ܾ Ǿ ܿ ߿ ϴ. ܾ  Ǿ ٲ 𸣱 Բ ð ֽô Ǿ ܿø ū Դϴ. ذ ͼ ķδ ð ܲ ˷ֽ ã, T/F/NG Ǯ ϸ м ϴ ߽ϴ. ܰݿ پ Ǯ鼭 ð ȿ ؼ Ǫ ߽ϴ.



* Listening: ׽ܲ ! Ѵ޳Ҵٸ! ħ 5 ݿ Ͼ 40 80 Ǭ!! ϰ ϼ̱ ħ Ϸ θ Ϸ ߽ϴ. ׻ п ѵνð ͼ 1Ʈ Ǯϴ. п ܾ 縵 򰥸 ܾ ܿϴ. ְ ⿡ Դ ֱ öڸ ˾Ƶθ ϴ. 쿡 ù ° ° 迡 ְĿ insurance Ȱ Խϴ. ̷ ܾ ܾ ô õմϴ.   



* Writing: ׽ũ2 5.5ݿ ̾Ƚܲ ߽ Main ڿ ׻ ޹ħִ for example, ü ߽ϴ. ó ǽ ׷ ϴ ϰ Ҷ ϸ ־ϴ. Ŀ ׽ 7.0ݰ ̵ ݿ پ ܾ, collocation, ° ܿϴ. ܿ  ̷⵵ ߾, ¥ ܿ ߿ װ ٸ ְ Ǿϴ. ׽ũ1 ,,α׷, μ ϳ ° ܿϴ. 庰 ܿ ߿ ٸ ǥ ġ ߿ ܾ ٲ㼭 Ǿ ߽ϴ. ÷ ޴ ߿ ϴ. Dz ϸ ,ܾ,ǥ ѹ غ ǰ, Ʋ κ Ʋ ÷ Ǽ ĥ ־ϴ. ׷ ִ Բ κ ãƳ ߴ ϴ.     



* Speaking: ٷ ŷ̾ϴ. ׷ ͵  п ŷ 뿡 2ð ߽ϴ. ַ ׳ Ʈ ߽ϴ. Ư Ʈ2 ָ鼭 ߽ϴ. ̷ 2 ð ׻ üũ ְ ϴ ൿ Ȯ ־ ϴ. Ȯ ʾ ׷ ´ٴ üε Ե 2е ä Ϸ ־ ߰ Ѵٰų ͵ ѱ ߱ Ǿϴ. ׸ ð ٷ ⹮ 迡 ݺǼ ⹮ 鼭 غ߽ϴ.

 

5. edm̿ Ե鲲 ϰ ̾߱⸦ ּ.

׽ – Ҹ ׽! ù L/R/W/S ݺ ܰݱ ׿. ׸ŭ ū ƿ. ķ óϴ ζ  ؾߴ µ Բ ˷ֽ ϴ ,  θ ؾϴ,  ǰϴ ּż 3 ʰ ο ִ ƿ.  Ư ϸ п ħ 鼭 ϰ ÷赵 ´µ ׶ ֽð, Ư ֿ ׽ũ1 ʹ Ƚ 3,4 Ἥ ãưµ ߸ м  ؾϴ ڼ ˷ּż ¥ ߽ϴ. 𸣴°, Բ ãư ȴٴ 󸶳 ū Ǿ .  ߿ 涧 ũ ãư ̿,, ׸ŭ ʹʹ ϰ ϴ. ó ٸ 鼭 ϰ ֵ Ҳ!! !! ƿ뤻           

 

̾Ƚ- ü 鼭  ׽ũ2 ϴ Ʋ Ȯ ƿ. 𸣴 ͵ īװ ִ ǥ ˷ּż ô ͵ ô ٰ ־. ߾. ó Բ ÷ 4ðɷ µ ʹۿ ä ڷῡ ִ° 󼭼 âߴµ ߽~̴ ϸ ϲǴ°ž ּż Ī Ŀ ڽŰ ִ ƿ. п ϸ ÷賻 ޴ ð ſ. ( ̰ ^^;;) մϴ!!

 

- ! ִ ܲ ŷ ʹ ´ٰ ˷޶ Ź帱 ģϰ Ʈ2,3 ϰ ϴ ˷ּż մϴ. п Ʈ2 徿 ؼ ϴ Ѱ Ǿ. Բ ìֽ ڷ ̾. ũ ϰ ìֽô ŷ ü ƿ,, մϴ!^^

 

߽ ! ׻ ħ ϼż ްԽǿ ڽ ƾ ƿ. Ӵ Ҳ Ư Ͻô ;; . ϰ Ѵٰ Īְ ż ߽ϴ. ε ó еó Ҳ..׻ ʹ Ϳ ô Į!!!edm ù ̾µ ׶ ʹ ּż ߽ϴ!! ȴ° ʹ Ϳ ˷ܰ Űܵ ǿ ֺƾµ ׻ 鼭 λּż ߽ϴ^^ Ե ٽѹ մϴ!

 

׸ ׻ л ϴµ ʵ 鿡 ֽô ,Ӵ,븮Բ մϴ!!^^


6. edm̿ п ּ.


- Ե

: ū ִ ԵԴϴ. Ե پ ǽǷ° ⹮ ü ˷ֽô ͵ ˴ϴ. Ư ÷̳ ŷ ȥڼ ̱ Ե Ůϴ. ܿ ϱ Ե鲲 ּż ϴµ ū ˴ϴ.

-

: 鸶 ٸ ڽ ذ ʿ信 ° 7.0, ŷ 6.0 ̷ ִ ҽϴ.

- Ư

: Ѵ޿ 2 ϴ Ư, Ư Ǵ ġ ٽ, ÿ 迡 Ǵ ٽ Ʈ ֽϴ.

- ڽȯ

: չ ַ 1 Ŀ п ڽ ߽ϴ. 701ȣ 1ú 9ñ Ӱ ְ, Ŀ Ư ڽ ؼ ִ ȯ ϴ. ̷ ڽȯ ų ϴ ־ ϴ.

- ŷ

: ŷ ϸ鼭 ؾϱ ϱⰡ  edm ŷ ־ ͵ 2ð ŷ ־ϴ. ī䰡 ƴ϶ п ŷ ־ ð Ƴ ־ϴ.

- ü ġ

: ġ 뵵 ſ ϰ п ü ϰ ϰ Ǿ־ п ٴϴ ߴ ϴ.

  -ǰ

:  п Ѵ޿ ι ǽϴ ǰ縦 鼭 Ҽ ־ ҽϴ.  ۼϴ ߸µ ǰ 鼭 ð ۼغ õ 尨ְ Ἥ ־ϴ. 賡 ̾ȼԲ ֽô ؼ ǵ ̵ ϴµ Ǿϴ.

 

7. IELTS յ ģ鿡 Ǵ ּ.

濡 ó Ϸ £ ° ƽϴ. IELTS ṵ̈ غ ʿ ٴ Ǵܿ ٴϱ ߰ ٰ̾ Ȯմϴ. ð ȿ ؼ ؼ ϴ ϴ ле鲲 ڽְ EDMп õմϴ. Ե ũ ֱ Ӹ ƴ϶ ܿ ſ 

׸ Ȥ θ غðų ͼ ʾƼ ϱ ηϽô е ôٸ ⸦ ھ. п 縦 ߰ ܱ ɰ̶ غ  Ű澲 ʰ ҽϴ. ϱ ԰ ⺻ ϴϱ  ǰ ڽŰ Ѱ ƿ.  ϸ ϴ ʰ Ѵٸ ̶ Ȯմϴ. ׸ 鶧 Ե Բ ϴ ģ鿡 ûϼ ܵ ģ ٸ ̷ θ ƿ ū ˴ϴ.

ϴ  ġñ ٶϴ ȭ!!^^


Heather 17-09-20 10:38
 
!!!!!! ~~~ ׻ ̶ ҷµ 츮 ...
ž Ф ƹư ߰, ~~~ !
edm̿ 17-09-20 22:07
 
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~!! ҽ ϳ ְ~!!
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JacobT 17-09-21 14:00
 
е ƴϰ е!!!^^ ϱ⸦ ٷ~~^^ !!!~
edm̿ 17-10-11 10:38
 
ϵ帳ϴ ^^  հ ʹʹ ϵ帳ϴ.  ſ ij лȰ ϱ ٷ!! ѹ ϵ~ -edm ̿ п-
 

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