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1. ڽ Ұּ.


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 * ̸: ä
 * : 6.0(writing ׼ !)
 * Ⱓ: 2016.07~2017.04
 * IELTSΰ: ij

 
2. ֱٿ IELTS迡 ۼּ.
 * : 2017.04.22
 * : Academic (    ), General (   )  <---üũּ.
 * : Listening(   6.5 ), Speaking( 5.0  ), Reading(  6.0 ), Writing( 5.5  )


(overall 6.5 б Դµ (L 7.0 / S 7.0 / R 6.0 / W6.0) ̷ Ծµ װ ĸĸ س ڷᰡ . ȭ Ȩ ߴ󱸿Ф ޾Ҵ ĸ 6.0ۿ  ϴ ̰ɷ ÷ؼ Կ!)

 
3. ġ Ұ ּ.

 ݱ 8ΰ ſ. ù ϳ 𸣰ڰ ״ ¿ ̶ 翬 Ա. ι° ʹ 尨 ߾. ׸ ̻ϰ ´ ־. ...ұ 𸣰ڴµ(̿! ϰ ޾Ƶ̽ø ſ䤻) ׻ 뿡 ĥ 󱸿. õֱε . ܿ£ ļ û ߿. Ȥ ܿ£ ġô е 忡 ֽñ ϴµ Ȥ 𸣴ϱ ̶ ƹ͵ (̳ پ ؿ)!! غذ! ߿ ģ Ƚ 4 Ѿ ׷󱸿䤻 


4. IELTS  ߴ, ι(Ͽ) Ӱ ּ.


 * Reading: ׳ Ǯ. ̶ л̾. ϰ, ´ ϰ. . ׷ ׳ ġ´ о. ̰ ٸ е׵ ڴµ, о. ó 忡 쵵 ְ, ã 쵵 , ð 󱸿. ó , ù 忡 . ̷ ߰ װŴ......  ð . ̷ ʰ Գ䤻׸ ܾ 𸣴 ư ׳ ǽ 帧 Ѿô° ΰ ƽ Ŷ ؿ. ٽ ư ȵſ! 𸣴 ܾ ִ ̷ ̰ڰŴ- ϰ ߷ϱ! ׷ ɸ ͵鵵 ʾ ſ..


 * Listening: ̷ Ҹϸ ʹ غ ó ڽ ִٰ ߾. ٸ п ٴϰ ġ, ߰ п ٽ ؼ ׷ . 쿬 ƴ ٳ п 迭̶ ̳ 縵 ŵ. ٵ ̿ ڸ ݱ  °ǰ ;. پ, ǼƮ ⵵ ٸ ü ̾. µ ̰ Ͱ. ׷ ̿ . Ϸ翡 2 ħ ݺؼ , п ϳ 鼭 ƶ ̷, Ϻ ̷, ̷ ȥ мϸ鼭 غ հ ߾. , TED talk TED ϴ° ־. ̵峪 ٸ ɽǮ 鼭 ͸ Ʈ̰ ߴ ƿ. ڸ̶ ũƮ Ǵϱ 鼭 ǥ , ǥ ϰ ׷ ð ´ ƿ. ߿Ѱ ѽõ ݾ Ʈ̱ ϴ󱸿. Ϸ ϸ ٽ · ưϱ ׸ 鼭 ̶ ϸ δ㽺 Ǵ󱸿. ¥ β 鼭 ϸ鼭 ô 濡 ȥ . ϸ鼭 ϱ ŷ ϴ ̴󱸿. ٵ 濡 ȥ ϼ. β.


 * Writing: ..̰Ŵ ¥ . ~~~~ 𸣰ھ. ü Ʈδ  ؾϰ ΰ ִµ Ͼ ̸ ä ΰ ߴ ƿ. ׸ δ ޾Ҵ ̿. ù 迡 task2 常 Ծ. ϰھ 常 Ȧ Ծ. ó߾. п   ؾ ǰ , ¥ ׳ ܿ. ̷ Ͻô󱸿. ȵǰ ׳ ϳ ܿ. ׷ ܿ. ̰ ٰܿ dz? ̷ Ͻ 𸣰 ſ. ¥ ˴ϴ. ܿ° ܿ鼭 ܿ ⼭ ̷ п ̷ ϴ° ܿٺ ϱ ¥ ƾ. ϰ ܿٺ 𸣰 ܿ ͵ ׿ ȿ ְ ִ󱸿. ó ڽ ٰ Ͻô е ܿ ؿ. ׸ task 1̶ task 2 ٸٴ ε ˰ ǰſ. 1 мϴ Ŷ 2 ڽ ǰ ġ Ŷ 2 䱸ؿ. ׸ 1 ªٰ ؼ Ȧ ϸ Ȧϰ ............ ׷... 1 2 ߿ϴϱ ð й ϼż Ǫžؿ. ðйϴϱ µ Ȯϰ ݹ . 1ð ȿ 1 2 ϴµ 1 30 2 30 . ðй ߸ϸ ⵵ Ⱦϱ ϼ. task 2 о ִµ ' ׷ ̵ ...! ' ϴµ Ӹ ߴٰ ſ. ¥ ־ ׷.....̷ ߴµ Ҹ . ⼭ ° ġθ 巯 ±..

 * Speaking: ŷ տ ȥ δٴ٤ٴ٤ ؾ ϴ°Ŷ ¥ ̶ þ԰ ƿ. Ķ...ݹ...ܱ Ĵٺ ......Ӹ Ͼ........¥ ̷ ,....ϴ Ǵ´ ϼ. ̶ Ƶ 򰡿  ߿Ѱ °! ׸ . ׷ٰ ʹ ° ð 鼭 տ ʾ. , ŷ Ϸ ¾ ̴. ϴ ó ڽְ Ʋ Ʋ Ʋ ϰ Ͻô° ƿ. ׸ ĵ ֽø ƿ! edm̿ ŷ å ־ å ִµ Ϸ翡 3徿 ޴޴ ܿ鼭 ߴ ƿ. ׸ ð ׷ ϴ Ȱ Ͻñ. ٸ ŷ ó θϰ ޻Ĵſ. ڽ س ־. ġʰ Ͻð ٸ е鲾 ǵ ޴° ߿ؿ! ű⼭ ̳ κ ֽðŵ! ŷ ð ƴٴϽø鼭 л ϴ ̾µ ܵδ뿡 ö ̾. ̿ ø ƹ͵ ƴϿ . ׸ ϴ ܾ  ͵ ˷ּż ǰ ߾! ˷ֽ keen on ̰ µ ǰ ϴ䤾 ô հϰ . մϴ.

5. edm̿ Ե鲲 ϰ ̾߱⸦ ּ.

׽ - հݼ øϴ ܤ!!! ʰڴٴ ̾ ٰ б ڸ !  ٸ ĸ ʴ ٶ ٸ ..... ü 󰡸鼭 ¥  ε ܱ ͼ θ ϰ ֳ׿. ٸ ׻ ߾. ˸¾Ұ մ ⵵ ּż.. ̰ ƴϿ 뤻 ð ȥ ̷ 帮鼭 ̸ŭ ٰ ׷ ̰ Ѳ ָ ϳİ ȥ...׸ ׻ ׸ ΰ ִٰ ݷּż .   ͼ İ Ź ֽð  , ߴ, ̷ ض, ̰ Ķ ٷιٷ ǵ鵵 ֽ հ ־ ū ̾ ƿ. ׸ հϰ ǿ θż ֽð ϰ ִ Դ ū Ǿ̴ּ ƿ. ڷ Ȥ ֳİ ݾ ϼٵ ڷ ֽø鼭 ֽðФФгʹ ... ֽ ŭ ⼭ ϰڽϴ. 

- . ̷ ̷ ų ϰ ׷ ׷ĸ鼭 ϰ Ƿ ô....... ϸ鼭 ......׸ ŷ ð ¥ վ. ̶ ŷϸ鼭 ¥ ֱ ߾. ó ģ Ͻôٰ ߿ ּ ణ Ϲġ ..׷ ȣ . ̶ ϴ ƽ ̤ФФп⼭ ϴٰ Ʒ ڽϴ Ͻø ȵſ. ̷ ѳ 帮°

Ű - ̶ ߴ ŷ 迡 ͼ ¥ ű߾! ٷ ߴ 迡 Ͱ 鼭 δ һ󺸴 ħϰ ǥ ߴ ׿. ׸ task 1 ɾƼ ϳϳ ֽð ּż ¥ ذ ƴ...̤̤̤̳ʹ ̶ ߴ ¥ IJϰ Ʊڱߴ ׷ ..?.. 𸣰ڴµ غη İ ̾. ð ð Ŀ ϳϳ Űּż Ƚϴ, ϴٰ ж ½ ½ ̴ϴ! մϴ٤
 
6. edm̿ п ּ.

п ü ʹ ƿ! ǽǿ ڽ ִٴ ְ...
ٵ Ե鲲 ٷιٷ ǵ ֽô ׷... .......
Ǹ ڽſ 缭 ִٴ° ƿ. ݿ ݿ ̷ 缭 ϱ ȿ ƿ.
 
7. IELTS յ ģ鿡 Ǵ ּ.

տ ־. ׷ڵ ̶ Խϴ. ϴ° ¥ ƿ. ʹ հ Ұž. ̹ հ ? ϴµ. ̷ ͵ ȵǴ󱸿. ϸ鼭 , ͵ ְ δ ͵ ־ ϴ ŭ Ȯ ʴ󱸿. ׳ ǽ 帧 츮 ε װ Դٴ Ͻø δ㽺ǰſ. ´ ׸ ǵ̸ ŷ ŵ ʹ ϴ󱸿. ǵ̸ Ӹ ӿ ϰ δ ˾ ̳ ڿ ɷ ؼ Ͻô° ƿ! ŷ϶ ؼ Դµ ̳ ؼ ˾Ƶ ־. ׷ Ƹ ȭ ſ. ͼó ޷ ߴ ι ƴϿ. Ƶ ȭ ̼Ҹ ϰ Ѿô. , ¥ ־. ̷ ߽ϴ!


Jackie 17-07-28 13:55
 
б ֳ?:-) ġ ͼ Ѱ Դٸ ųϴ ﳪ׿. հݼ ʹ ־ 鼭 о. ſ бȰ ϱ ж ! ٽѹ ϵ帮, ҽϴ.
Heather 17-07-28 14:13
 
̰Թ ı߿ ° Ҹ ҹ ִ? ư ׵ ߴ ı⿡ ٴ Ҹۿ ° ^^...... ѱ ~~~~
edm̿ 17-07-28 17:30
 
ϵ帳ϴ ^^  Ƣ ſ ı ^^ Ͻ ŭ ͼ Դϴ~^^ſ Ȱ Ͻñ ٶϴ. ٽ ϵ帮, ູ ð ǽñ⸦ ٶϴ~ -edm ̿ п-
edm̿ 17-08-02 10:39
 
հݼ ~ ڽ ij ϸ̼ б~ лȰ ϴ° ϴ. س . If little labour, little are gains. = No pain, No gain
ּ ؼ ϴٺ ž ׸ ;ߴ 帲ũ Ǿ Ű ~!!!
                                                                                                            - ׻
 

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